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                                     Kiss and Makeup

Hinata sat on a log in team eights training field watching Shino and Kiba sparing and as always they were turning it into a personal fight. With a loud sigh Hinata went over to the two and said it was time to take a break and eat their lunch.

“Sounds good to me I think I wore Shino out.” smirked Kiba.
“Hn… As if. ”replied Shino pushing his new sunglasses further up. Taking his lunch from Hinata he went and sat on the log farthest from Kiba and Hinata.”
“Kiba is Akamaru okay? He has been scratching himself for the last twenty minutes?” Hinata asked shyly.
“Akamaru come over here buddy… what’s bothering you? You didn’t roll in those prickly bushes and get barbs stuck in your fur again?” Akamaru walked slowly up to Kiba and whined. Sitting down he began scratching his neck with his back paw. Scooping up his dog he began looking at his fur. “Oh, no Akamaru it looks like you have fleas! Placing Akamaru on the ground he balled up his fists and stormed over to Shino.
“You stupid jerk you gave Akamaru fleas!  You did this to get back at me for your sunglasses breaking yesterday. “He growled.
“Kiba don’t be stupid. I didn’t do anything to your dumb mangy mutt.”
“What the hell did you call Akamaru?”
“I said dumb mangy M U T T!” Shino said standing up fists clenched at his side .
“Take it back right now… bug freak! “Yelled Kiba growling he’s fangs showing.
“Don’t call me a bug freak… dogboy! Shino yelled poking Kiba in the chest with his finger.
“Don’t call me dogboy you baka bug lover!” Kiba growled shoving Shino.
“Maybe you shouldn’t take peoples glasses and break them!” Shino yelled pushing Kiba back.
“I told you it was an accident. I didn’t mean to knock your glasses off and step on them! ”Giving Shino another shove backwards.

“Enough!” screamed Hinata jumping up and standing between the two. “I am sick of you two fighting! This tension between you two has been going on for weeks. What ever is causing this …fix it! Now, I am going to take Akamaru and give him a flea bath. I expect you two to kiss and make up by the time we get back.” With that she scooped up Akamaru in her arms and stormed off. Leaving Shino and Kiba glaring at each other.

“Bug freak!” yelled Kiba into Shino’s face.
“Don’t push me dogboy!”
“I told you Shino don’t call me that!” grabbing Shino’s glasses and throwing them in a nearby bush.
“That’s it Kiba! You asked for it! Said Shino thru clenched teeth. He balled up his fist and punched Kiba in the stomach.  Kiba bent over coughing.
“You, want a piece of me don‘t you!” he growled before throwing his fist at Shino face.
Shino jerked his head to the side avoiding the approaching fist. Kiba was thrown off balance since his fist missed and before he could catch himself he fell over forward knocking Shino onto his back. Looking down he was straddling a very wide eyed Shino. Without thinking Kiba leaned down. His hands grabbing Shino’s collar as he kissed him. His eyes widened as he realized Shino was grabbing his shirt pulling him in closer. Pulling back slowly to catch his breath he stared into Shino’s eyes.
“Shino I…I…  really like you …. Do you? I mean you kissed me back …and well… sorry about your sunglasses. I just wanted to see your eyes and…”
“Shut up Kiba and just kiss me.” Shino said pulling him down into another kiss.

Hinata had just reached the edge of Team 8 training grounds with Akamaru when she stopped at the scene in front of her.
“Well, that’s not quiet what I had in mind when I told them to kiss and makeup.’ Smiling down at Akamaru.  “Come on Akamaru, let‘s leave the two love birds alone. ”

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This is my first Yaoi (boy/boy) fanfiction. It is a little fluff oneshot with Naruto's Kiba x Shino. The characters are a little OC so if you don't like OC don't read.

I wrote this for my Deviant buddy Death Tripp and his friend Crimzun :hug: and their awesome Shino x Kiba Yaoi club.
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:icondemind70:
demind70 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
awww adorable love it!
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moonwitch1 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thx.i have not been on deviant for some time.lots of family stuff going on.hope to be adding more stories and finishing some of the ones still on going.
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demind70 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
no problem and I'll be looking forward to the stories and hope everything is going well for ya ;)
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eevee-chan112233 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is really good!! I love it!!
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moonwitch1 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thx i hope to do more stories this yr.
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xcite101 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2011   Writer
love it. so kawaii
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moonwitch1 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thx
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fanfictionfreak672 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2011
LOL thumbs up thats awsume XD
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moonwitch1 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thx so much!!
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raylasohma Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2011
its awsome ^^
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moonwitch1 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thx i hope to start writing more this yr
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raylasohma Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
Hope so can't wait to read if you do! :)
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darkshojo Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011
Excellent dude! Keep writing
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moonwitch1 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thx and i will be writing more this yr
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irocklikerocks Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010
=) hehehe i love this pairing and i'm writing a shino/kiba yaoi story also :D hehe this is really good i loves it :3
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moonwitch1 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thx i willhave to ck ur story out!
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Chika-sama Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AAAAWWWWS! ~~<33 Lovely! ShinoxKiba 4Ever! <3
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moonwitch1 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thx for reading and commenting!
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animerulez12460 Featured By Owner May 9, 2010
this is really cute you should write a sequel

aren't you the one that wrote Finding Her Heart featuring Gaara and Hinata?
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moonwitch1 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thx yep i wrote that story also. I have been off deviant and fanfic for over a yr.lots of family stuff going on with my kids.i also had my dad pass away.i was an only kid ....with my mom passing as well as most of aunts/ uncles itleft me to deal with all the estate and selling house.so i have had little time to myself.i plan to finish my on going stories and i have new ones written in numerous spiral notebooks.that and i will be adding cosplay pics of the fam.yep the kids got me cosplaying finally. I mostly do Yuko Ichihara of Xxxholic. Hard to find woman anime/manga characters that at age 41 i dont look silly as. Also i have her personality a bit hee hee. Thx again for reading and commenting
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animerulez12460 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
I understand the family thing. My mom had two babies within two years and it's been harsh. we have our good moments and other times i want to strangle everybody. I haven't been on DA in forever as well...I'm writing a new version of Blooming from a better point of view. And your welcome for reading and commenting
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tsuki1993 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2010
lol. they took the phrase kiss and make up a little bit more literally. good job!
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LockedPrisms Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010  Student Writer
Whoa, whoa, whoa. Now thats what i call kissing and making up. I also have a Shino x Kiba story, go to my profile and read it if you like.
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junelo810 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2009
o0...cute
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AjaSama Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009
KYA! So cute! I luved it! :3
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AjaSama Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009
KYA! So cute! I luved it! :3
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squimpmunklvr Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww its adorable. -cuddle-
=D
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moonwitch1 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks!
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squimpmunklvr Featured By Owner May 11, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
=D anytime
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Amaya-Sen Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2009
AWW!!! I liked it!! this is a classic pairing and I couldn't hae it if I tried. you did an excellent job!!
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uchihafan123 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD that was great
I thought hinata would say "I didnt actually think they'd literally kiss and makeup " XD lol

<kibaxshino 4 life
:3
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MidnightMachiko Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2008
i am a huge yaoi fangirl for this couple i really love this it made me cry!!!
(instant fav)
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101akamarus Featured By Owner May 3, 2008
write more!i love 'em.more!more!more!more!more!more!
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moonwitch1 Featured By Owner May 16, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
wow you make me blush like Hinata. I am so happy to know someone likes my work. I hope if i keep working on my writing someday i will create my own fiction romance story for harlequin books. Well i hope to. LOL
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tickan Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
NNNNaaaww thats cute ;) absolute loved it yey
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moonwitch1 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww thank you!!!
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angelballer45 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Only people who love what they do can do what they love....
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iamlibby526 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2007  Student General Artist
KYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO DAMN CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :Adoration:
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lonleystar Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2007
ha ha i love hinata's reaction!
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BloodyPitOfDoom Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2007
Very good =D, *claps*
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moonwitch1 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much:hug:
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VampShinobi Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2007  Student
Eeeekk!! -Is a Fangirl of KibaxShino.- Love it! Love it! Love it!! Its gonna make me type a Kiba and SHino pairing story too!!
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Peace101 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awww. is there a 2?
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moonwitch1 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
do you think i should ?
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:iconpeace101:
Peace101 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it'd be pretty cool to have a 2.
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irocklikerocks Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010
I agree :D
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moonwitch1 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Then i will but you need to give me some good plot idea for these two.
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:iconpeace101:
Peace101 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
what do you mean?
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:iconmoonwitch1:
moonwitch1 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
not sure where to go with this story. so if you have an idea let me know.
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:iconpeace101:
Peace101 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
like have them run out of the forest and go to kibas empty house and they do ''activities''. lol. is that enough?
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